The choices of sounds/ tones and mixing is pretty well done but I have the impression that I stare at a Dr. Frankenstein's monster, meaning that I hear a lot of phrases and loops which have nothing to do with each other.
00:02 - You start with a "airy" reverbed synth playig C note. You would expect that would be followed by a chord that include the C note (C major, A minor, F major, F minor...etc), but instead it's followed by
00:20 - E minor chord (E, G, B) which make no harmonic sense, then, the e min chord progression (E minor, D major, C major) is mixed with a "acid synth" playing D-F-D-F.
00:39 - WTF!!! is a harsh sounding clashing there (E min chord, E-G-B, together with D-F, clash between E&D, E&F, G&F, then D major D-F#-A, clash between F&F# pretty much like sandpaper on my ears).
Then, the bass line doesn't follow the harmony (or harmony doesn't follow the bass) and the TB-ish synth pattern use no notes from harmony or bass line.... I'm too tired to go on, but I have to agree with the other review that says you need to listen and learn a bit more music.
However, your mixing skills seems to be pretty good.