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The choices of sounds/ tones and mixing is pretty well done but I have the impression that I stare at a Dr. Frankenstein's monster, meaning that I hear a lot of phrases and loops which have nothing to do with each other.

00:02 - You start with a "airy" reverbed synth playig C note. You would expect that would be followed by a chord that include the C note (C major, A minor, F major, F minor...etc), but instead it's followed by
00:20 - E minor chord (E, G, B) which make no harmonic sense, then, the e min chord progression (E minor, D major, C major) is mixed with a "acid synth" playing D-F-D-F.
00:39 - WTF!!! is a harsh sounding clashing there (E min chord, E-G-B, together with D-F, clash between E&D, E&F, G&F, then D major D-F#-A, clash between F&F# pretty much like sandpaper on my ears).

Then, the bass line doesn't follow the harmony (or harmony doesn't follow the bass) and the TB-ish synth pattern use no notes from harmony or bass line.... I'm too tired to go on, but I have to agree with the other review that says you need to listen and learn a bit more music.

However, your mixing skills seems to be pretty good.

Axel7 responds:

THAT, I like, thank you, I can work with this, THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!! QWKJBFVAJF!!! no I shit you not, see, that tells me SOMETHING

Nice track, a bit sad in some places but nice. Well done.
I would put softer drums, maybe brushes, but that's just my personal taste :)

BlazingDragon responds:

Thanks! I love your jazz tracks and really appreciate the review. :)

This was a project for my MIDI Music Composition class. I was given a basic chord progression (mostly of I, IV, V) and was supposed to sequence a simple drum beat, bass guitar, and block chords on a keyboard instrument. That was way too easy though, so the instructor said I could alter the chords however I like.

I used EZDrummer and didn't have the jazz expansion with brush samples. Otherwise, I'd try my hand at some more traditional jazz. Christmas is coming up though... :)

Thanks again!

If you want some smashing guitars in your ears, then this is one track you MUST LISTEN !

Nice track, well performed and pretty well recorded.
Somehow I have the impression that the voice doesn't stand out enough, is a bit too washed off with reverb while the quite dry guitar stands in front of it.
I would either put some more reverb on guitars, or put just some delays on voice, no reverb. Maybe some lo-fi delays on a send could add some nice texture to the track.

Nice laid back feel, probably because of the not quantized piano. Good choice of instruments, very well fitting together.

Nice track, a cool combination of electronica with jazz. Very well mixed.

Sounds really cool, nice composition, good mixing and pretty diverse palette of feelings.
Congrats, good job on this.

Cool track, really nice composed.

Echo responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback! :D

-- Erik Scerri

Don't be bitter, be better. (A.Madubuko) Flesh will rot but songs remain in ages. (Citrina)

Mihai Sorohan @sorohanro

Age 49, Male

Musician

"Gheorghe Dima" Music Academy

Norway

Joined on 7/9/06

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