Not bad for a first
There are a lot of things to improve but for a first submission is not as bad as it could be ;)
There are some interesting tutorials on Audio Forum and a whole section entitled "Ask your Fruity Loops Questions Here" where you can get some advicess and tips for audio production with FL.
Cheers.
I've been looking around the forums but the only thing that seemed like it would have Tutorials for FL was a four year old post with outdated links. >.>
love the guitar
Your mic did a good job on guitar.
You did a good job with composing, recording, playing and all the rest.
Congrats!
Yo Mihaiiiiii thanks for the review the new microphone did work out pretty well on this song. There are some minor issues I have but I dont think I can be bothered to record it again from scratch! Cheers for the review dude :D
Love,
The Pink Penicorn
good tack
In fact it's so good that I was about to ban it for being stolen...
No, it's not a joke.
After all the issues were cleared out we're happy to see that good bands actually post their best songs on NG.
Congrats.
5/5 10/10
LOL thanks man that means alot and i'm glad we got everything cleared up Brokensaint is gonna keep posting our shit on here and start letting people know about newgrounds
Thanks again
-Justin
MaestroRage and DarKsidE555 is a WIN
Yep, one of the Best combinations ever existed on NG.
So, this include the best features of both, impressive big orchestral from Maestro and wicked guitar work from DS, a must have in your playlist.
Ah come on, stop it with the praise already. I'm a real bitch at playing guitar. :/ Not as good as I wanted to be. Glad that you like it though.
Thanks for checking ma man! :)
by mistake
I found your music "by mistake" ... listening to NG radio, I'm quite happy finding your music, as you can see from my rating, I like it ;)
My favorite part is from 2:20, reminding a little of "Revolutionary Study" of Chopin.
Welcome to my fav list.
(still, the arpegios in the begining maybe need a little bit of work, also the middle part let me a very stillness impression)
why ... oh why ?
why do you make music that good :))
I don't know what software you use but sounds very realistic, from guitar to strings section ... love the tempo changes also
5/5 10/10 fav'ed
awful
awful but funny (in a way)
clipping in some places (that should be fixed) try to lower the volume or put a compressor on it
It kind of clips because the left and right channels didn't record from the gameboy to the computer... Because of the fact that it was indeed made with a gameboy I cannot put a compressor on it or it would defeat the purpose of using a gameboy.
so much for short
great track, building CRAZY tension, sounding pretty realistic too.
love the dynamics and tempo changes, great construction.
5/5 10/10 added to fav's
nr 51
my review is the 51 ... but that's absolutely not important.
the overall sound of this one is BIG and generous, the big chords on the piano reminds me of Rachmaninoff , also the harmony progression ...
on apparently simplicity there are quite complex progressions going
if this is "First song of the new year" I guess you started the year very well
5/5 10/10 added to fav's
noisy
the idea is not bad, but to me seems kind of messy (no structure, no theme)
mixing is AWFUL!!!
first, noise on the guitar (guess no grounding),
second, drums sound like you recorded from a far cd player (instead on making the mix in the computer)
third, no panning AT ALL, sounds like a mono mixing to me
didn't vote because I don't want to give a bad vote (I hate 0-voters myself, so ...)
hope you'll improve
Weill, it's an improvisation dude, give me a break haha.
Im not a jazz guitarrist, I play metal most of the time, but thanks alot for your feedback.
Don't be bitter, be better. (A.Madubuko) Flesh will rot but songs remain in ages. (Citrina)
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"Gheorghe Dima" Music Academy
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