not bad
i'm gonna 5'v you 'cause you'v been o-bombed :D
anyway, not bad, i like the keyboards, show that your dad have experience and knows harmony and is familiar with styles.
on the other hand, your guitar tone is not bluesy enough, is too synthetic, like you're using a cheap processor.
also, try to get out of that pentatonic/blues scale, try to listen to some jazz guitarists and learn more harmony, try to enrich your playing.
as i see, you have quite a bright future in music.
Good Luck